twilight tiger

I liked this. It really sounded like a song to me. Like, I put a tune to it in my head. And made it like I was singing along to ...

I enjoyed this. The imagery was really good; I could picture the scene you presented. Nothing was wrong with it, other than the present tense that changed to past tense. ...

I like the form you wrote it in. It was as though it was a letter or an argument. It was as though I was standing there and hearing you ...

i liked that poem. i agree with the one above me. (forgot the name) but this was really good. I liked that line about the anger being a fire in ...

This poem was really deep. I liked the way you used symbols at the end. The way it changed from long lines full of pain, to short lines filled with ...

this piece was funny! :lol: I enjoyed reading it. It was short and random, just the kind of thing that puts a smile on someone's face, or a laugh bursting ...

I really enjoyed reading this. It was magnificent. The details were wonderful, it made me feel as though it was me that was being touched by Steel. I mean, that ...

Like a sturdy tree, once tall. As a study tree, it falls.

On an endless path, I wander. Unsure and afraid, I ponder. What should I do? I'm confused! I think of us and I muse... What once was; what could have ...

I remember a time long ago when you had hurt me and down I go... You broke my heart, and I thought I was gone, I have since recovered, turns ...

She was a wondrous flower, as I was an ugly weed. She was a gracious lion, as I was a stinging bee. She was a radiant thing, do you not ...

" Do you want to dance ? I want to see you move , give me a chance , I'll show you how to groove " I liked your poem. ...

I really liked this. It had depth, rhythm, and it flowed wonderfully. I could sense your pain. It then took a twist to happiness; the smooth U-turn from pain and ...